Friday, January 9, 2015

Canto Y - Soumare and Welsh

Soumare

I do not know Angeline Bellia,

“ terracotta figurines with representations of
musicians are a privileged yield
investigation and understand the
importance of music in both its literature context”

notice the form in the way it trends figures
and illuminates its way speaking
even if you don't speak the languages

Terra-COTTA figuriNE with REPresentation,
data data needed out of deeded the dignity
dee DA da dee to D… D… note the fluidity that that entails,
it is a form of discourse that is very,.

Where as an unpublished novel, not mine,
has a waspish tone which alone is its to bear:
( and this is not the end, but it should be:)

"For a moment she found herself in a bearish paralysis
her eyes slowly opened, she was fully conscious
yet couldn’t move a muscle.”

“In those times she wondered
she wondered what death would feel like
the slumbering into an irreversible state,
“she tried accepting the paralysis and
see if she’d go back to sleep peacefully
but the invisible grasp seemed to tighten around her seams."

"In a blast she thrust herself back awake
and didn’t feel like sleeping anymore,
she felt vastly better and from a glass of cold water.
“Unavoidably something felt wrong but her mind
wasn’t allowing her to pin point the diverging source,
she looked around the darkly lit room and”

“ brought herself to a sitting position."
Ismael, O Ismael, there is a mighty hand inside your head
even if you cannot understand it.


"In a blast she thrust herself back awake
and didn’t feel like sleeping anymore,
she felt vastly better and from a glass of cold water.
Unavoidably something felt"
"wrong but her mind wasn’t allowing her to pin point
the diverging source, she looked around the darkly lit room
and brought herself to a sitting position."

note back the appositives can be strong or weak,
depending on how form draws them out,
strong weak strong weak strong strong strong weak.

Ian Welsh

“ signed talk technology,
and the catastrophic teachers it makes possible -
how it avoids.
This is just about climate change,
which, if it goes really wrong,
way but humanity
( if for example the oxygen cycle gets screwed up:)”

this is different from the above,
notice ubiquitous surveillance genetic engineering and nanotechnology
all crowded together and then such short words between them.

He knows what he is doing,
with short words like Galts,
which only are words for people who
have read the original.

“Extinction or whole world totalitarianism events”
he mixes iambic with dactylic freely in every line,
as if he knows that iambic are both modern and
antique at the same time.
He uses it as a signature.

Though of obviously people of his moment in writing
prefer bland to exciting.

I will just note that the dactyl is misdefined
in Wikipedia. A dactyl has strong weak weak
as if basis form, and makes the second foot strong or weak
depending on its metrical use.
Any audio high Conejos.
If you want to point out the stress,
just say in Greek, with English as the metrical draw.

Iamb

Iamb ,Has a different kind of validity,
in English as opposed to French,
and Greek uses dactyl has supposed to iambic.

This form of metrical stress.
Different for every different language,
even ones that are very close,

we don't define stress as one of the additional disciplines,
where too busy in school teaching what breakfast cereals to eat.

That's important because they teach it on TV.
And we all know that if it is on television, it must be true.

Korea

ah, repeated as the first word in Korea,
and it is hard to pronounce in English,
once I could decipher it with great aplomb.
How easy it was to do so,
it was almost as if my tongue had different postures,
for different languages, and now it has trouble with just a few.

Judo chop jittering jaw jutting jaw
it sounds nothing like Korean
should Insha Jadeja Shin job
those are the same word translated into Korean.
I meant to be saying “car”,
but the computer forces the sounds to come out in English.

Though it is interesting what words come from English,

 such as “shower”, but not telephone.